Great story! I was drawn in right from the beginning by the character's voice. I enjoyed the vivid visual descriptions too and the blend of reality and imagination!
This was a very interesting read. I liked how you effectively entered into the mind and imagination of a child. Question is, how do you get back out? Asking for a, uh friend.
Wow, I felt like I fell right in with them! This was great!
Thanks!
Wow. I didn't see that coming. I, too, was immediately taken in by the voice telling the story; later, by the weirdness. Really good weirdness!
I’m glad it was good weirdness. :)
Great story! I was drawn in right from the beginning by the character's voice. I enjoyed the vivid visual descriptions too and the blend of reality and imagination!
Thanks for reading!
A really strong narrative voice there - one to use again I think
Thank you for reading!
This was a very interesting read. I liked how you effectively entered into the mind and imagination of a child. Question is, how do you get back out? Asking for a, uh friend.
Thank you so much for reading. :)